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Beta reader needed for the first 50 pgs of MG fantasy

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I need a beta to help me primarily on pacing and tension. I'm getting the beginning is dragging and needs to be sped up. I can read MG or YA. The story is about a 13 yr old girl that buries herself in the ground every 7 days to survive. Sometimes she comes out of the earth as an animal. Whatever the case, she has to try to find missing children and solve the mystery that goes along with it.

I'd be happy to try whatever genre. Thank you for reading! Hope to hear from you soon.
#1 - December 15, 2020, 12:01 AM
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I'd be glad to take a look for you, Lisa.
#2 - December 17, 2020, 02:55 PM

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I can help too, if you'd like. I think I saw some of this earlier in the year.
#3 - December 17, 2020, 06:15 PM

I would also be happy to do so.
#4 - December 27, 2020, 08:26 AM
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