Next to Jane Yolen and Philip Pullman, I got the immediate vibes of "Narcissistic-Personality-Disorder Fantasy Writing":
- Story-dominatingly "misunderstood" heroine, who's too caught up in pre-adolescent Misuderstood-angst to have fully realized her world-saving mutant/psychic powers yet,
- Small cadre of membership-carded characters protecting small secret of goodness from "Something" that wants to destroy it for never-fully explained reasons,
- Characters who don't support our heroes (like the Principal in "Wind in the Door") shown either hopeless or completely undeserving of our sympathy--While our main heroine has private wiser mentor/s who's at her call 24/7, except in the climax where she gets to show how Misunderstood she is,
And the story-killer for me:
- Allegorical fantasy-metaphor thrown out the window for flat-out author-sermonizing:
In the scene where one of the IT-possessed baddies asks "Who are these 'Mrs.' to whom you refer?", ML has Charles blurt out "Oh, fer cryin' out loud, they're ANGELS!--Hadn't you figured it out yet??" (Or words to that effect.)
(...Oh, thank you, Madeline. We were having such trouble figuring it out, you see.) :smoke