Oh, your pages are lovely! I think kids would like that kind of book, it's like something you'd see show up at a Scholastic book fair. Even though it's fiction, it would have appeal among a certain kind of student. (My daughter and her friends would have been all over it in upper elementary/middle school.)
It reminds me a little of Robin Ha's graphic cookbook Cook Korean! A Comic Book with Recipes, which was published by Ten Speed Press.