*Warning--a lot of blah, blah, blah follows this warning.

Okay, so I have the tendency to take books I like after reading them, and skim them chapter by chapter, then write a few words on the mechanics. Like one chapter says "meet parents" and the next will be "introduce character C", things like that. It helps me figure out some of the mechanics of plot progression and pacing, I guess.
So anyway...I was quickly jotting my way through Shiver, and I stopped at chapter 34. The first paragraph was perfect.
"Days blurred into a collage of common images: cool walks across the school parking lot, Olivia's empty seat in class, Sam's breath in my ear, pawprints in our front yard's frosted blades of grass."
Bam! Evokes a certain mood and time passage, in vivid detail, for me. It also reminded me of fall in Wisconsin, when I WAS in high school, eons ago.
Like today--it's fall, the AC is off, the ceiling fans are off, the kids are gone, the cat is hiding somewhere curled in a ball to stay warm. It's perfectly silent. All the lights are off and it's gray and drizzly outside. I have the back door open to let that stagnant summer air out of here, and the smell of the season creeps into the house. I'm in my favorite hoodie and fuzzy black slippers. That's why I love
words so much--I live that way inside my head as well! And my present, past, and future are yanked out of the nether by the right combination of those words.
Oh, and I still love this book!
