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Picture Books (PB) / Leniency in punctuation for aesthetics?
« Last post by zvree on Today at 04:59 AM »
Hi folks, checking please re our freedom in style in picture-books use of periods.
In my case regarding small statement sentences, and a page of many animal kids in a family each expressing some minor thing eg "I'm hungry", "Mama, now", "My tummy hurts"etc.
Does each mini statement/sentence need to end with a period, or eg can they all have no period?
Of course technically they should in non picture-books. Stylistically it looks better without in this case. It's a very busy page and just seems like there should be no periods for the feel of it.
However, I don't want to draw criticism later on. There are a few other pages with similar mini statements.
Tia!
