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Title: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on January 05, 2011, 09:32 AM
 Verla Kay's Critique Service is temporarily closed. (She is moving several states away.) It will reopen by January, 2016.

:cheerleader It's up and running for real!  :cheerleader

Here's the way it works. If you write picture books and would like to have one of your books personally critiqued by Verla Kay, send an email to:

verlakay2 (at) aol.com

Be sure to take the spaces out of the email addy and replace the @ symbol for the word (at) before using it!

Put CRITIQUE SERVICE in the subject line of your email. Payment will be via PayPal to this same email addy.

You will email your manuscript to Verla as soon as a confirmation email that your payment has been received has been sent to you by Verla. Within four weeks you will receive by return email a full critique of your manuscript. Your personal, thorough critique will include some or all of the following:

"Overview" comments about your story concerning its appropriateness for today's market and the age of children for which you are writing
Assistance and or comments about the pacing and image possibilities of your story
Line by line editing of the story itself
Assistance with rhyming and rhythm when appropriate

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Prices for personal picture book critiques are:

300 words or less = $75

301 to 500 words = $100

501 to 750 words = $150

751 to 1000 words = $175

1000 to 2000 words = $225


Word count is for the story and supplemental material only. It does not include your name and/or byline or the title of the story.
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: lousears on January 13, 2011, 07:15 PM
Verla Kay,
Thank you so much for your new critique service!  Your review of my PB manuscript was very thorough and extremely helpful!  You were not only complimentary, but you also didn't hold back when you found areas where revisions were needed.  I needed to hear what you had to say.  I'm sure with your help, I will reach my goal of becoming a published author.
   :yourock
Sincerely,
Lou Sears
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Penny Klostermann on January 14, 2011, 02:52 PM
Thank you! I am so glad that I decided to use your service. It was worth every cent. I would use you again in a heartbeat. :thanks2
You gave me lots of information to process & apply as I move forward with these & future manuscripts.
I think you did a great job...very helpful.
On a 5 Star Scale...I give you 6!
 :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: ecm on January 22, 2011, 03:11 PM
How cool, Verla! Do you have a dedicated webpage on your critique service? I'd be happy to share it on FB and elsewhere. Happy New Year... and happy critiquing!  :cheers:
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on January 22, 2011, 07:05 PM
No, but that's a very good idea. <duh> :duh Why didn't I think of that?  :eh2

 :thanks2  I'll let you know as soon as a page is up regarding it.
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Liz on January 23, 2011, 07:23 AM
 :cheerleader

Go Verla!

Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Petoskey on January 27, 2011, 05:32 PM
 Verla, your critique of my PB was so thorough and so helpful. Not only did you spot a weakness there, you pinpointed my writing weakness in general. Your hints for strengthening this story are intriguing. My brain is storming. I'm hard at work on the "what if" game and am planning to use it on other stories. Thank you so much for offering this service. You've given me a huge boost. Carol
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: writerdebm on January 31, 2011, 07:06 AM
Wow! Yes on this service, Verla!! :clap:
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: KGray on February 07, 2011, 11:17 AM
YAY!!!
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Bonnie Crow on February 16, 2011, 11:00 AM
Verla Kay's Critique Service

Thank you so much for your speedy and reasonably priced critique. I like the two main goals you use when you critique a manuscript: first, to give suggestions and ideas on how you might make the story stronger and better [which you did], and second, to point out the major things that I think you are doing right, so you can continue to build on your strengths and improve your writing [which you did]. I heard Cynthia Leitch Smith speak and she said that is what helped her the most when she started writing: an editor circled a scene and said, "Write more like this" and she did. The rest is history [cliche alert].

Your comments and suggestions were detailed and informative. Thank you again for a wonderful critique.

To all the wonderful writers out there: USE VERLA KAY!

Bonnie Crow
check my blog at:  Bonniecherylcrow.com
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: flurries on March 01, 2011, 11:31 AM
 I used Verla's critique service for my rhyming picture book story. I appreciate every single comment from Verla.
Her feedback was helpful and detailed, encouraging me to challenge myself. And that's a good recipe for perfecting my craft. Thanks, Verla!
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Linda C on March 07, 2011, 08:16 PM
 :star2 Verla what great ideas for my critique. Really got the thought process going. I can't wait to dive in and 'revise'.  Big thanks  :goldstar

Linda C.
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: IndyAngie on March 30, 2011, 06:20 PM
I was so pleased with Verla's critique of my pb that I sent her another one the very next week.  As a result, I have two polished manuscripts that I sent off to an agent this morning.  Verla's comments were invaluable, allowing me to clean up what needed cleaning but also offering a lot of encouragement.

Thanks, Verla.  You rock!     :hairdude

Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: ghost on March 30, 2011, 08:27 PM
Verla,

Have you given any thought to offering your critique services for MG nonfiction wiith the possibility of higher word counts(maybe up to around 30,000 words).
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on March 30, 2011, 11:52 PM
Yes, I have, ghost... but I'm not quite ready for that yet. :-) We're in the middle of "life mayhem" at the moment, and I need to know I can have a lot of time to do longer critiques before I offer that service.
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Pinkpolished on April 11, 2011, 08:01 AM
Verla's critique service was invaluable! It was my first time using a critique service. She was so encouraging and had the most helpful suggestions. I am so thrilled that I invested in this service! Thanks again Verla!!
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on April 11, 2011, 09:29 PM
I'm so glad I could help you, Pinkpolished. It makes me feel wonderful when I can help other writers on their journey to success. :moose :verla
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: dewpoem on August 31, 2011, 11:10 AM
Verla,

Thank you for your VERY helpful critique.  You have given me a lot to think about and to work with.  I would recommend your service to anyone needing help with their manuscript.

 :yay :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar :goldstar
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on August 31, 2011, 02:41 PM
Yay, dewpoem. I'm so pleased I was able to help you with your manuscript. This really "made my day!" :flowers2 :verla
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on June 07, 2012, 09:04 PM
Bumping this up to announce the reopening of the "real" critique service. The trial run and test critiques were wonderfully received and I feel confident now that I can do justice to people who are ready to have me work with them on their manuscripts.

Thanks to everyone who participated and put up with me during my trial run of this service. Now I know how long it "might" take me to do critiques when life gets in the way, and my service now reflects that longer time period. It's very possible yours will get done sooner, but I should have no problem meeting the four week deadline that is now listed for this service.

:)
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: DonnaE on June 07, 2012, 09:07 PM
SOunds like a great deal to me!  :hairdude
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on January 13, 2014, 01:41 PM
Just a quick note to mention my critique service has reopened and for a limited time (until March 31, 2014) it has discounted prices. :)
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: DonnaE on January 15, 2014, 09:09 PM
Anyone who has NOT used her service needs to give it a shot! I was so impressed with the attention to detail and care she took making sure I got my money's worth! Verla is fantastic!
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: carol-federoff on February 07, 2014, 07:06 AM
Oh this looks so tempting!  But It makes me try to figure out which to send as I can barely afford one, let alone the several that I have...
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: LadySlipper on February 07, 2014, 07:13 AM
Can you recommend critique services for YA or MG manuscripts?  Thanks!
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Petoskey on February 09, 2014, 01:44 PM
I agree with DonnaE. Verla's critique was thoughtful, thought-provoking and so thorough. I value it highly. It was worth way more than the cost.



Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Mercedes Ortiz on September 02, 2015, 02:40 PM
I'd like to know what are your current prices, Verla? Thanks!
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Verla Kay on September 02, 2015, 07:01 PM
The first message in this thread now has the correct prices listed, Mercedes. Thanks for asking.
Title: Re: Verla Kay's Critique Service
Post by: Mercedes Ortiz on September 03, 2015, 07:35 AM
Thank you, Verla! :)