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Looking to read some recent PBs of this type. I'm eager to look at story arc, in particular, as this seems to be one of the biggest challenges of writing in this style. (Of course, character is crucial as well!)

Any ideas?

So far I've come up with VAMPIRINA BALLERINA (and sequel, VAMPIRINA BALLERINA HOSTS A SLEEPOVER) and WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN.

Of course, there's the perennial IF YOU GIVE A MOUSE A COOKIE franchise!

Any titles you'd add to this list?
#1 - August 10, 2015, 04:04 PM

The newly released YOUR ALIEN by Tammi.

You can also check out HERE COMES THE EASTER CAT. Not really 2nd person, but a dialogue between narrator and MC. Might be informative.
#2 - August 10, 2015, 05:09 PM
NED THE KNITTING PIRATE, GRIMELDA series,
CITY SHAPES, DORIS THE BOOKASAURUS, ONE SNOWY DAY, PIZZA PIG, and more...
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How to Babysit a Grandpa
#3 - August 10, 2015, 05:24 PM
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Ooo, yes! I'm dying to get Your Alien! And How to Babysit a Grandpa is a great one too!  :thankyou
#4 - August 10, 2015, 05:40 PM

Oh! I just remembered another one! HOW TO CLEAN YOUR ROOM IN 10 EASY STEPS
#5 - August 10, 2015, 06:21 PM
NED THE KNITTING PIRATE, GRIMELDA series,
CITY SHAPES, DORIS THE BOOKASAURUS, ONE SNOWY DAY, PIZZA PIG, and more...
http://www.dianamurray.com

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How about IS YOUR BUFFALO READY FOR KINDERGARTEN?
#6 - August 10, 2015, 07:05 PM
COWHIDE-AND-SEEK (Running Press Kids, 2019)
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How to wash a wooly mammoth  - Michelle Robinson/Kate Hindley
#7 - August 11, 2015, 06:25 AM

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These are so great!  :thankyou  I just picked up a bunch from my library (waiting for others). While I was there I saw on display another title to add to this list: How to Draw a Dragon.

Thank you guys for your help!  :love5
#8 - August 13, 2015, 02:01 PM

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I hope you enjoy YOUR ALIEN. It was extra(terrestrially) fun to write.  ::-)
#9 - August 13, 2015, 02:04 PM
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I can't wait to read it, Tammi! I still have it on hold at the library. I hope people read quickly!
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She will enjoy it.  Because AWESOME!
#11 - August 13, 2015, 03:44 PM
VAMPIRINA IN THE SNOW (Disney-Hyperion, 2018)
BUSY-EYED DAY (Beach Lane Books, 2018)
GROUNDHUG DAY (Disney-Hyperion, 2017)
among others

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