[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Hi Everyone,

I'm going to be leading a three-hour picture book intensive at our spring SCBWI conference in April. I'm furiously gathering information and would love to know what topics you'd most like to see addressed in an intensive. Also, do you have any favorite hands-on activities geared toward pb writing that you'd like to share? If so, I'd be happy to credit you and mention your book(s). Thanks!

[Jean Reidy Posts: 724 Status: Offline I love kids' books!! WWW]

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I'll be curious to see what folks have to say!
Jean

[KDuBayGillis Posts: 281 Status: Offline]

I did an SCBWI PB intensive workshop with Melissa Manlove of Chronicle last May...she did a great job.  Some things she did that I thought were really effective...

1) read alouds to us to highlight different aspects of PBs that she loved (and not necessarily her or Chronicle's books)

2) having us think about hooks by acting as a bookseller in small groups and pitching our fav PB to other people in our group then the group voting on which book they'd buy based on the pitch/hooks

We also worked in small groups and went to different stations...one station focused on hook/character/problem...the next station focused on character wants/problems...the next station focused on "three tries" to solve a problem...another station "say it in one sentence."

I found the work we did on "say it in one sentence" and hook really helped me think about my work...what the emotional heart is for my story and where a bookseller would position it in the bookstore. 

Good luck with your intensive! 

-Kellie

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Jean! I was expecting words of wisdom from you. :-)

Kelly--Thanks so much! I'd thought about hooks because I've heard so many editors mention them at conferences lately. But I hadn't thought about the "say it in one sentence" idea. I'll definitely keep that in mind.

[217mom Posts: 1,157 Status: Offline "Keep the child in view"- Charles Dickens WWW]

I like the 'say it in one sentence.' Very PB apropos.

Another idea is to read a paragraph from less-known PB, not show the art, and ask for a character or place description. We are told time and again that the text must be complete,' while leaving plenty of room for the illustrator to be co-creator. I think this is aimed at that skill.

[Jean Reidy Posts: 724 Status: Offline I love kids' books!! WWW]

Jean! I was expecting words of wisdom from you. :-)

Kelly--Thanks so much! I'd thought about hooks because I've heard so many editors mention them at conferences lately. But I hadn't thought about the "say it in one sentence" idea. I'll definitely keep that in mind.

Hah, Katy! I did a PB presentation at our regional SCBWI two years ago. And this fall I'm doing a workshop. I have an outline of what I'd like to do, but I love the idea of tapping what's on the minds of PB writers via this thread. So thank you for posting.

Jean

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Thanks, Mirka.

Jean, hopefully we'll get some good ideas/comments. :-)

[taralazar Posts: 261 Status: Offline WWW]

One of the most eye-opening things that I learned on my path to publication was 32-page picture book layout--making a dummy even though I'm not an illustrator. It really helped me realize which scenes were too long or too short and when my page turns fizzled instead of surprised. I have a page about it on my blog and it's the most frequently accessed page: http://taralazar.wordpress.com/2009/02/22/picture-book-construction-know-your-layout/  This is almost common knowledge now, I realize, but at that point in 2009 I was like...DUH!!!!

I also like to "think about the hook BEFORE you write the book." As a result, many of my stories tend to be high-concept.

And PB writers should know their story should have an emotional core, a universal emotion that kids can relate to. There's the topic--which is what the book is about on its surface (like dinosaurs, ballerinas, trucks, princesses) and then the theme--what it's about at its core (friendship, family, fitting in, perseverance, etc.).

I LOVE PICTURE BOOKS. HAVE FUN!

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Thanks so much, Tara!

I'm planning to include info on thumbnails and dummies. And I've included some ideas about hooks prior to writing, but (even though this knowledge exists within my cluttered brain!) I hadn't thought about discussing the necessity of the "visible" topic and the more "invisible" emotional theme. Great idea! I shall explore... and provide concrete examples.

And in my idea section--I'm definitely sharing my PiBoIdMo experiences this year! 

Thanks, again!

Katy

[pjlyons Posts: 60 Status: Offline Constantly Creating WWW]

Hi Katy,

I love how in Farmer McPeepers you allow the illustrations to tell part of the story (I even used it as an example in my master's thesis), so don't forget to discuss the dance between text and art.

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Wow! Thanks! Farmer McP is honored to be a part of your thesis!  :thank you

And I will indeed include info about leaving room for the illustrator to do his/her work.

Katy

[taralazar Posts: 261 Status: Offline WWW]

Ooh, I really like calling the topic and theme "visible" and "invisible". Can I borrow that?

Glad you are sharing the PiBo experiences!

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Go right ahead, Tara. I love how we all share and help one another. That's what it's all about, right?  :

[Debbie Ridpath Ohi Posts: 56 Status: Offline Twitter: @inkyelbows - Instagram: @inkygirl WWW]

I learned so much at a picture book writing workshop taught by Diane Muldrow from Golden Books. One of the exercises I found enlightening: she gave us picture book texts and asked us how we would paginate them. Interesting to compare our resulting pagination with the pagination used in the final book, plus she pointed out how the pagination affected the story.

I learned a much greater appreciation of page-turns and pacing, and became much more aware of that aspect from then on.

Debbie

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Ooooo! What a great exercise, Debbie. I'll definitely keep that for future reference. Thanks for sharing it.

[Jean Reidy Posts: 724 Status: Offline I love kids' books!! WWW]

I'm thrilled you said that Debbie, because a pagination, page turn and payoff exercise is one of the items I included in my workshop.
Jean

[KatyD Posts: 844 Status: Offline www.katyduffield.com WWW]

Okay, Jean, now you're going to have to explain the "pay off" exercise. 

[Jean Reidy Posts: 724 Status: Offline I love kids' books!! WWW]

Sorry, KatyD, I just now saw your question. Your "payoff" is what you get after the page turn. Is it surprising, satisfying, funny, etc. The biggest payoff would be your AWWWWWWW-some ending.
Jean