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I'm thinking there should be dashes. Correct?
her black-tights-clad legs.
Comma after day?
It was such a beautiful day, and it would've been nice to picnic under one of the huge maple trees.

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#1 - July 31, 2013, 04:13 PM

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Hyphens, not dashes. :)

Otherwise, you're good!
#2 - July 31, 2013, 06:01 PM
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[headslap] Yes, hyphens!

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#3 - July 31, 2013, 07:30 PM

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