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If a kid gulps something down, or slurps spaghetti, is it incorrect to put the words in quotes...e.g.

"Gulp!"
or "Slurp!"

Should they be without quotes?
Gulp!

#1 - September 20, 2013, 08:06 PM
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Without quotes. The quotes make it look like he's literally saying the word "gulp."
#2 - September 21, 2013, 06:58 AM

No quotes, and I think you're supposed to italicize sound words. At least, that's how I do it.
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I also vote for italicizing. Unless the character is making some sort of commentary on his bad manners. :)
#4 - September 21, 2013, 09:07 AM
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I thought italicizing was a big no-no. But if that's convention, I will use italics. I've had a manuscript for six years, and revised it over a hundred times, yet, last night was the first time I noticed I used "Gulp!" (in quotes). I'm horrified...missed it over re-reads and revisions over six years! I better fix that before I send the manuscript out again.  :shame
#5 - September 21, 2013, 10:17 AM
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I thought italicizing was a big no-no.

Why is that? I've never heard that.
#6 - September 21, 2013, 10:38 AM
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Yes, italicized sound words. I think overusing italics can be disruptive to the  reader so it's often recommended to use them sparingly.
#7 - September 21, 2013, 10:42 AM
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