[crystal205 Posts: 48 Status: Offline I love kids' books!]

Hi,
I'm writing a Middle Grade book for the first time. How many pages approximately should be in a chapter for a MG?

[mrh Posts: 4,238 Status: Offline www.marciahoehne.com WWW]

If you're talking manuscript pages, I personally follow a "10 or fewer" rule, and it's often 6-8 or so. Chapters for younger MG might be consistently shorter.

[Melody Posts: 515 Status: Offline WWW]

For upper MG you are probably okay going up to 12 pages, maybe even 14 max. You just don't want any one chapter to be too long for young readers. Make sure you are reading lots of books in the level you are writing for, so you get a feel for chapter length, etc.

[217mom Posts: 1,120 Status: Offline "Keep the child in view"- Charles Dickens WWW]

What they said^^. 

I should add that there are wonderful books that have chapters that are shorter than half a page and chapters that are four-five pages in the same book. (Olive's Ocean by Kevin Henkes, a Newbery honor book ,comes to mind.) But these are by established successful and experienced writers who do not fear breaking rules and don't have the same hoops to get through.

 I mention this because while the upper limit is sound (I'd say ten and under is a good way to think of it) if you write with a strong literary grasp of the forms you can do unusual things, and more writerly power to you.

[crystal205 Posts: 48 Status: Offline I love kids' books!]

Great! Thanks so much, everyone!

[Debbie Vilardi Posts: 5,707 Status: Offline Language is so cool! WWW]

I like to think of chapters as mini stories. Each has a theme occurring over one or more scenes. I switch to a new chapter when the theme changes. Some chapters are longer than others.

Consider the reading experience you want. Consistent chapter lengths are better for some books (chapter books are often this way). Short chapters may make the read feel quicker. Longer chapters may give the book a denser feeling. (It depends on what's in the chapters, of course.)

I could write another whole paragraph on how chapters end: cliffhangers or not. It will depend on the type of book.

Ask yourself why you are breaking the text into chapters in the first place. Some books just have sections with no breaks (although they may not be middle grade.) My point is that you have to think of the book as a whole and what you want the book to be when you decide about chapters.

[SarahW Posts: 304 Status: Offline The extraordinary in the ordinary. WWW]

If you're talking manuscript pages, I personally follow a "10 or fewer" rule, and it's often 6-8 or so. Chapters for younger MG might be consistently shorter.

Interesting, I use to go for something closer to around four pages per chapter. Or roughly 1,000 words. Altogether this would mean a book of about 16,000 to 18,000 words.

I like to think of chapters as mini stories. Each has a theme occurring over one or more scenes. I switch to a new chapter when the theme changes. Some chapters are longer than others.

Consider the reading experience you want. Consistent chapter lengths are better for some books (chapter books are often this way). Short chapters may make the read feel quicker. Longer chapters may give the book a denser feeling. (It depends on what's in the chapters, of course.)

I could write another whole paragraph on how chapters end: cliffhangers or not. It will depend on the type of book.

Ask yourself why you are breaking the text into chapters in the first place. Some books just have sections with no breaks (although they may not be middle grade.) My point is that you have to think of the book as a whole and what you want the book to be when you decide about chapters.

Debbi! That's brilliant. Not only is that to me does it make it easier to hold a reluctant reader's attention, but it can also train one for word brevity, and how to use words in an efficient way.

Before I started middle grade, I had done flash fiction for a long time. I also studied poetry as well, particularly Eastern forms like Haiku, Senryu, and Tanka. Cinquains are good too. But also a seven point structure that allowed me to structure each chapter as an independant story.

[jodyjl Posts: 390 Status: Offline]

I like Debbie's way of thinking of each chapter as a mini-story with it's theme. I should consider that.

In my first novel, my chapter lengths vary considerably, but I like shooting for the 1000 word-mark give or take 200 words.

I can say that my students LOVE books with short chapters, and I kind of do as well.

Good luck with your first MG novel.

Jody