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You know this very special narration is hard to pull off, but when done well it is mind blowing. I know novels for adults (Atonement, Gone Girl, and more) that use it. I'm looking for examples in kid-lit. Yes, there are YA novels using it (The Thief, Speak, and more) but to my sensibilities YA is not kid-lit.

Any titles you can think of will be appreciated.  :flowers2
#1 - April 06, 2019, 04:16 PM
THE VOICE OF THUNDER, WiDo Publishing
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Well, it's not as clear-cut as YA books (or adult books), but I'd say these have hints of it:

 The Lost Prince by Frances Hodgson Burnett (one of my favorites, though perhaps not a deliberate deception),
 The Thief by Megan Whalen Turner (probably borderline YA, though),
perhaps The False Prince by Jennifer Nielsen (though it's not a deliberate deception there)

I suspect it's harder in middle grade because it's harder to 'lose' the trust of the reader without undermining the whole purpose of the middle grade novel?
#2 - April 06, 2019, 04:35 PM
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I Want My Hat Back by Jon Klassen borders on what you're looking for.
#3 - April 07, 2019, 05:11 AM
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I will check all these out. I'm excited already!  :thankyou
#4 - April 07, 2019, 08:20 AM
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I really enjoy stories with unreliable narrators...there's just a different vibe. But you're right, I don't see it much in PBs. Is it because children are inherently honest? I remember my very first lie at age 5--I'd made paper airplanes and boats out of my dad's thesis and when he came home he was livid so I said my brother and sister did it and they got a spanking. I got it from them later. This lie wasn't revealed until we were all adults. I couldn't think of any PBs not mentioned, but look what I found: http://blogs.slj.com/afuse8production/2013/04/26/the-unreliable-narrator-in-the-picture-book-format/   Other suggestions in the links. And I adore Dear Mrs. LaRue!!! The author has some tips for writing such books. Happy reading and writing!
#5 - April 07, 2019, 10:19 AM
BOUND (Bodach Books, 2018)
TEN EASTER EGGS (Scholastic, 2015)
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What an amazing resource this link is, Vijaya! {That makes *you* an amazing resource for posting it.}

Of course, in books/movies for older readers, the "unreliability" of the narration/narrator is often because of mental illness. I can see this cannot be used in books for younger readers. So these examples are brilliant.

Vijaya-- blaming your siblings was handy, because you had them. I didn't have any, so I blamed the imaginary Micky Mouse I claimed lived under my bed. I was an unreliable narrator, all right.  :duh
#6 - April 07, 2019, 10:33 AM
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I'm thinking older picture books, but The Monster At The End of This Book (starring Grover) and Miss Nelson Is Missing both have unreliable narrators.
#7 - April 07, 2019, 04:17 PM
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Indeed. The only one i could think of was Miss Nelson is Missing.  :trenchcoat Now I have more to look at.  :thanx
#8 - April 07, 2019, 04:59 PM
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The "Clementine" series by Sara Pennypacker has an unreliable narrator who gives her version of events and it's up to the reader to read between the lines to understand what actually happened. Junie B. Jones does that as well.
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