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Another celestial rhyme  V-1

"If love is a thing, where is it?"
Asked the fox.
The owl replied, "It's in the sky,
The grass, the rocks."
"But it's something I can't touch
Or smell or see."
The owl sighed, "Love is like the wind my friend,
As it blows through the trees,
You see, love and wind are vast
Yet can't be seen,
They can only be sensed, in the moment,
From the movement of a leaf."
#1 - April 29, 2019, 01:49 PM

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I moved your post to Poetry. Let me know what your purpose is in posting this. It's lovely!
If you want it to be critiqued, I can move it to a private SCBWI critique area.
#2 - April 29, 2019, 02:42 PM
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