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Retreat Faculty

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Ronald L. Smith, author

Ronald L. Smith is an award-winning author of several middle grade novels including Hoodoo, Where the Black Flowers Bloom, Gloomtown, The Owls Have Come to Take Us Away, Project Mercury, and Black Panther: The Young Prince Trilogy. Ronald grew up on Air Force bases and has lived in Japan, Maine, Alabama, Michigan, South Carolina, and a bunch of other places he doesn’t remember. As a boy, he loved to read, especially fantasy and science fiction, and this inspired his lifelong passion of the fantastical. Before becoming a full-time writer, Ronald worked in advertising and wrote television commercials for big corporations, helping to sell everything from cheeseburgers to automobiles to airlines. Without a doubt, he’s much happier writing for kids. These days, you can find Ronald writing in coffee shops because sitting in a quiet room gives him the creeps.

Ron's Critique Categories

Ron will critique Middle Grade Manuscripts.

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Sylvie Frank, senior executive editor

Sylvie Frank is Senior Executive Editor at Flamingo Books, an imprint of Penguin Young Readers, where she acquires snappy, character-driven picture books. Prior to joining Flamingo, she was the editorial director of Disney Hyperion, overseeing acquisitions across all young reader formats, including Rick Riordan, Mo Willems, Ryan T. Higgins, and imprints Freedom Fire and Disney Planet Possible. She spent over eight years as an editor at Simon & Schuster, where she was the editor of award-winning and critically acclaimed books including Strictly No Elephants by Lisa Mantchev, illustrated by Taeeun Yoo; I Have a Balloon by Ariel Bernstein, illustrated by Scott Magoon; The Power of Her Pen by Lesa Cline-Ransome, illustrated by John Parra; The Crossroads by Alexandra Diaz; and OCDaniel by Wesley King. When she’s not reading, Sylvie can be found running while listening to audiobooks.

Sylvie's Critique Categories

Sylvie will critique PB manuscripts and PB Dummy Reviews.

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Mark Podesta, editor

Editor at Henry Holt Books for Young Readers. Editor of literature for young readers across all age ranges and formats with a specific interest in graphic novels, middle grade and young adult novels, and picture books.

Mark's Critique Categories

Mark will critique PB manuscripts, MG manuscripts, YA manuscripts, GN Pitches, PB Dummy Reviews.

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Leslie Zampetti, agent

After much experience as a librarian and writer, Leslie Zampetti became a literary agent. Her client books include TWO THOUSAND MILES TO HAPPY (Shapiro, Muddy Boots), A FEW BEAUTIFUL MINUTES (Fox, LBYR), THEN THERE WAS ONE (Cross, Penguin UK) and HART & SOULS (Schmid, Andrews McMeel, 2024). Leslie represents picture books through young adult, fiction & nonfiction. Stories by underrepresented voices are a priority, especially disabled writers. You can find Leslie on social media @literarylesliez

Leslie's Critique Categories

Leslie will critique the following categories: PB manuscript, PB manuscript non-fiction, PB Dummy Review, YA manuscript, YA manuscript non-fiction, Novel in Verse.

Leslie is not a good fit for didactic or strictly educational picture books, high fantasy, inspirational or Christian fiction, stories that use violence against women as the primary narrative hook, or hard sci-fi.

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Sasha Illingworth, associate creative director

Sasha Illingworth is currently an Associate Creative Director at Little Brown Books for Young Readers where she oversees a diverse list of formats including chapter books, middle grade and teen novels, along with select picture books and graphic novels. After earning her BFA in illustration at the Rhode Island School of Design, she moved to New York where she started her career in publishing and illustrated over 30 book covers. Sasha has art directed and designed a diverse list of bestselling and award winning books such as; Thank You Omu (Oge Mora), Saturday (Oge Mora), Malala’s Magic Pencil(Malala Yousafzai/Kerascoet), Hello, Tree (Ana Crespo/Dow Phumiruk), Parks and Recreation: Leslie For Class President (Robb Pearlman/Melanie Demmer), Strong Mama (Robin Arzon/Addy Rivera Sonda), and many more.

Sasha's Critique Categories

Sasha will critique PB manuscripts, PB Dummy Reviews, GN Pitches, and Portfolio Reviews.

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Kelly Dyksterhouse, agent

Kelly Dyksterhouse is a literary agent with the Tobias Literary Agency. She has a MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults and specializes in representing authors and illustrators who write for children. Her clients work on a broad range of projects from board books and picture books to middle grade and young adult novels, graphic novels, and fascinating nonfiction in the youth market.

Kelly's Critique Categories

Kelly will critique the following categories: Novels in any genre.

Kelly is not looking to add PB to her list at this time.

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