FREE Virtual Mini-Critique for First Pages

Aug 17, 2024

Online event

Free Virtual Mini-critique!

Free Virtual Mini-critique!

To help prepare for Golden Gate Day, we're offering a chance to receive constructive verbal feedback on your first page. Those who submit their first pages will remain anonymous. All SCBWI members are welcome to sign up for a critique or just to listen. If we receive more first pages than we can reasonably critique, priority will be given to Golden Gate Day registrants (in-person and virtual).  The online mini-critique will take place on Saturday, August 17 from 11:00 am - 12:30 pm PST.


After registering for this free mini-critique, you may submit your first page (around 200 words) via our form  [link to: https://forms.gle/p4L4ed6JU23GwgSo9] before Thursday, August 15, 11:59 PM PST.


Please register so we have a headcount. Zoom link will be emailed to all registrants before the event.

About the Speakers

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Margaret Bloom

Margaret Bloom is currently SCBWI SF/South’s Co-Regional advisor (Co-RA) after serving as Co-Assistant Regional Advisor (Co-ARA) for two years.She is the author of two books focused on hand-craft: Making Peg Dolls, and Making Peg Dolls and More (Hawthorn Press, UK). She holds a Bachelor's Degree in English Literature from UC Berkeley and an MS Degree in Counseling Psychology from Dominican University.

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Emily Jiang

Emily Jiang is currently SCBWI SF/South’s Co-ARA. She is the author of Summoning the Phoenix, illustrated by April Chu, published by Shen's Books, an imprint of Lee & Low Books. Summoning the Phoenix was listed among the Best Children’s Books of the Year at Kirkus Reviews & The Huffington Post and was honored with The Best Book of the Year Award from the Chinese-American Librarians Association. She holds an MFA in Creative Writing from Saint Mary’s College of California, where she received the Fiction Teaching Fellowship, and a BA in English from Rice University.