Written Critique Add-on

There is an opportunity to purchase additional critiques with faculty. Additional written critiques are $65 each and will be available for purchase on or after August 1, 2026. The deadline for critique submissions is August 8, 2026. After completed registration, you will be sent a Google Form to upload your work. These forms are manually emailed so please allow 5-7 business days post-registration before reaching out to Ohio North ARA, Britney Rudowsky at [email protected]

Written critiques will be returned via email the week after the retreat. If you have not received your critique feedback by Saturday, October 17, 2026, email Britney Rudowsky at [email protected]

What to expect in a written critique?

SCBWI has a standard form that faculty use as a framework for feedback. 

Manuscript feedback includes but is not limited to:

  • The positive aspects of this work
  • The elements that require attention and improvement
  • Notes on character development
  • Notes on plot/structure
  • Notes on language/diction
  • Notes on voice
  • Notes on marketability
  • Next steps
  • Additional comments

Portfolio feedback includes but is not limited to:

  • The positive aspects of this work
  • The elements that require attention and improvement
  • Notes on overall presentation
  • Notes on continuity and consistency
  • Notes on subject matter
  • Notes on perspectives and composition
  • Notes on marketability
  • Next steps
  • Additional comments

Dummy feedback includes but is not limited to: 

  • Strongest points
  • Areas to improve
  • Notes on pacing and flow
  • Notes on page turners
  • Notes on continuity and consistency (for illustrations)
  • Notes on text placement
  • Notes on perspectives and composition
  • Sub-Story Element Comments (If Applicable)
  • Notes on marketability
  • Overall concept comments